Nice first try I also think there is a little "much" with the writing, specially the reflection, would probably have faded that a little (in my opinion). Keep it up...
Khobie
Feb 27 2010, 06:54 AM
GREAT WORK!!!
Are you sure its your first attempt?
[EDIT: Spelling]
Khobie
faerie
Feb 27 2010, 10:51 PM
nice first try a bit busy for my taste
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