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sivaduraisingh
Hi Guys,
This is my First Animation Project..and its a team work.Team of 3....I need your Genuine comments on it..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hJIM24yh2tY
TerraPunks
Very nice job tell the 3 other guys i thought it was pretty good. The childish aspect makes it so much more funny.

One thing that was weird is the talking should be clear enough that there is no need for subtitles, or are you making those for a reason?

Other than that, Great Work drinks.gif
Hashishin666
Moved to creative souls from animation discussions.
flexinfo
i like the voice of the girl especially when she calls dadddddddddddyy!!

good animation tho, when the dad was running to the room looked like he was floating!
and i would say to make the girl a bit cuter. look at spongebob for cuteness, eyelashes, smile, teeth etc. kids relate with cuteness..

keep up the good work
shortcircuit
Very not bad...I liked it...Only ehm to be honoust i didn't like the voices. Sorry. But nevertheless animation was good work.
azriel
its good, i like it
sgp
ya, the animation is very good, but as Fae said, u could have made the girl cuter. biggrin.gif
























faerie
that was flexinfo, sgp stounge.gif
sgp
oh! sorry fae, i typed ur name in a hurry. biggrin.gif
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